Saturday, October 16, 2010

The Demon Angel

This is the story of Alice. She lived in a large house with her mother and father....
Her mother seemed to be the kindest woman on earth, Alice inherited her mothers kind qualities...
However her father was an enigmatic man, he spent his days in the attic, which alice was forbidden to enter..in fact the only way she knew he existed was when he played the piano and it would echo through the house.....


Every full moon, her mother would tell her the same story, it was the story of two angels who feel in love, but one day one of the angels was killed and when an angel dies they become a demon. but they loved each other so much that they stayed together and had a child, and when the child was born the angel gave her powers to her new born daughter daughter"..and this is where
Alices mother would always end the story, and whenever Alice asked her to finish it, her mother would say "Alice, when its time for the story to be finished, you will know" ....

On her 7th birthday she listened to her father play a song on the piano for her....but  being her birthday she decided her present should be to see her father...so against her mothers warning, Alice went to the attic...
However she found no one...the music seemed to be coming from the fireplace...

As Alice got closer she noticed as she got closer to fire that she felt colder...Alice reached out and touched the flame, and was not burnt...

but her mother came in, and for the first time she became truely angry at Alice...when she calmed down she told alice a little more of the story.."after the child was born the father locked himself away, for the evil within him ws beggining to take hold, and it would soon drive him to turn on his wife and child" and only with an angels touch could he be released"....Alice asked what her mother meant, and her mother went on to explain that Alice was the child from the story, and that by her touching the flame she had released her Demon father...but before she could finish explaining a secret door in the wall came open..and the whole room became filled with darkness...
Alice looked on as her mother entered the hidden room and began to argue with a strange man..she was confused, could her mothers story really be true...

My little angel! the man exclaimed as he saw the little girl stand at the door....

Alices mother rushed to protect her..but the man knocked Alices mother to the ground
 killing her as he did so...

with her dying breath she told Alice that it was up to her how the story would end...Alice became more afraid and ran...
she ran into a small room..the man was following but she closed the door behind her and locked it tight...

but somehow he was already in the room, sitting in a chair....her got up and with one gaze killed Alice..Alice though she had been killed was somehow still alive..she felt something inside her begin to change..a darkness began taking over..she grabbed at the door with her hand stained in her own blood trying to escape her murderer....she screamed for help but there was no one to rescue her
she felt as the angel within her died and a demon was born....

she looked up at her father...his laughter came to a hault when he saw vengence in her eyes

with her new found strength she over powered an killed her father, an act of revenge for the death of her mother.....
and thus a demon angel was born..spending the rest of her immortal life roaming the house..waiting for
a rescue that would never come...

The End 

4 comments:

  1. I hope it was scarry and not lame..well in the end i just hope someone reads it..lol

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  2. Is it bad I'm smiling? It is isn't it?

    Loved it. . .

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  3. forgive me for saying "daughter daughter" lol..just ignore one of em

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